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A grand world filled with wonders so bright

was presented to man, but despite

good intent, men still dare

fight o're land meant to share.

"Let us tear it in half!" yelled in spite.
A limerick! I hope you enjoy :D
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RuntOfTheLitter Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
WELL said and done! ....


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ROTL
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D
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Gosaku Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
How hopeless a poem.
It's easy to become defensive and offensive of power when you're so contested. Blood begets blood, begets blood, begets blood. You've been thrown into the world as a woman, a sex far too often seen as defenseless and purposeless to power consumption. Women can still abuse, of course, as some do, but they aren't often expected to be born with strength.
Innocence, she is seen as the she.
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, but I think it's only hopeless until people acknowledge what's happening in the world so we can change for the better. The human race is capable of so much, it's unfortunate  so many - male and female - let pride and jealousy and greed and fear get in the way of bettering ourselves and our planet. 
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RuntOfTheLitter Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
HELLO! .... YOU are a WISE 'human' in this OLD man's view ....

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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D
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Gosaku Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, but why I say it's hopeless is because of the last line. For people to be aware of what they're doing and press on, that is hopeless. Most don't see the grand picture, so they continue, believing themselves to benefit, their enemies to lose, and nothing else than that. People are incapable of complete self-conscious-ness.
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, I'm with you now :nod: yes I completely agree
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Gosaku Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I should've been more clear from the beginning.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well done. a sad truth.
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