literature

please don't leave without them this time

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Literature Text

Wait
don't you want
all these little
pieces of you?
I've been
keeping them safe
in my heart.
If someone drew a picture of this I might actually die of happiness.
Now that I think of it, that applies to all of my poems....

thoughts/feelings/suggestions?
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chihuahua4446's avatar
Dang, this is beautiful. If I could draw people well at all I would totally draw it. I can totally picture it in my head. Such a vivid picture for such a short poem. Bravo <3